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Titel: Avalanches
Språk: Engelska
Färdigskriven: Japp
Rating: PG
Varning: Död ?
Annat: Har precis börjat öva på att skriva på engelska och blev nöjd med denna så tänkte dela den med er!
Ord: 633


The crystal snowflakes where falling from the sky high above us and the coldness were surrounding my bare arms. This was the sign that it was finally winter, I didn’t like the cold so much but I always got fascinated by the snow. I didn’t have a jacket on and I didn’t care because this day was special and I was full of happiness. It wasn’t because it was my birthday.

We were standing on one of the meadows outside our little town. Behind me, stood the boy I loved so much and my hand was linked with his. I could hear his heavy breaths, he wasn’t the only one who was breathless. We’ve just came here after we had running from my house, from my home. My parents saw when he leaned forward to give me a kiss and they weren’t happy about that. They hated it and we needed to escape as fast as we could, and that’s the reason neither of us wore a jacket.

But the fact he liked me the same way I liked him, just made even more butterflies in me. It only made me forget all the things that were happening around us, the coldness but also the bad things that only made humanity feel even worse. Our world was falling apart and I was tired of the violent disharmony that our world was full of. All the hate the media spread, and the brainwashing they did, only turned everyone to bullies and made them self-centered. Where did all the peace go, how could we let all this happen. I don’t know, but this happened to fast and it was out of controll, we couldn’t stop it.

I turned my head to look into his beautiful ice-blue eyes and he looked so beautiful, specially when the snowflakes fell on his black hair. I saw the snowflakes melt and become really small waterdrops on him. He was so beautiful and I was happy it finally was us, me and him. My biggest wish was that the society won’t split us, take him to another place. By another place, I don’t talk about a town or a country, I’m talking about death. I didn’t want that, and if that would happen my own world also would fall apart, and I wouldn’t get better.

I didn’t know how long we stood in the middle of the meadow, just only looking. It could only be for a few seconds, minutes, hours is probably too long. But we stood here for awhile, and I started to notice the coldness and I could feel him hold me closer and we hugged eachother. To keep the little warmth we had because it now started to snow even more. It was like someone were throwing all the snowflakes on us, and it started to hurt.

I heard a mumble from the one I loved. Can we please dance. Dance to the very end. As he wanted, we danced in the snow together and we got colder and colder. The snow under us only kept growing and get higher and I felt more tired and almost dizzy. After some minutes I heard a low thud and I couldn’t hear his steps anymore. I ran to him, even if it was hard to look throught the snowstorm and it also had get darker, I finally found his ice cold body in the snow. I fell to my knees and looked at him and tears started to fall from my cold cheeks and I let my hand touch his face. He was dead. I started to cry even more, I wanted to be with him. I didn’t want to live in this horrible world any more. I leaned forward and kissed his lips before everything went black.

12 okt, 2013 18:08

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Du skriver sjukt bra och det är väldigt bra engelska!!

"If it's time to go, remember what you're leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me."

12 okt, 2013 18:22

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Skrivet av Jojo00:
Du skriver sjukt bra och det är väldigt bra engelska!!


Ååh, tack så mycket!!

12 okt, 2013 19:04

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