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Chapter 1 The mysterious person

It was somewhere in New York. Heard the bird's chirping and the sun shone on the streets. There were no clouds in the sky. It blew a faint air. On a street where many poor people lived was a man in a black suit and black blänckade shoes and black pants and a nice red tie with yellow flowers. He had a side parting. He had pale skin and his eyes were as black beetles. His head was elongated rod and the nose was pointed. He was tall and his name was Sam. Hey! Come here! Said a mysterious voice. Who is who are you Sam stammered and checked the around around themselves. I will not hurt you said the mysterious voice. When Sam looked longer, he saw someone in the shade. What is your name? Sam said with a nervous firm loud voice. Sam heard it exploded in one of the skyscrapers. Hurry up with and save the world as you always do! Sa the mysterious voice. And by the way my name is The dark shadow! How do you know everything about me? Sa Sam and checked the against the dark shade with a astonished look. But by then already the dark shadow away. Weird thought Sam. Sam walked a bit and started running towards the exploding skyscraper. But after he had run for a while he was stopped by a bunch of cops. Stop! You may not go ahead against the exploding skyscraper! Said a police officer who was in the right round. He had a dirty blue suit with a black jacket and a black tie. He had blond hair and blue eyes. His nose was quite small and round. He had a donut in one hand. I must go there! Said Sam sternly. What if someone is in there and die. Sam can not go into yours. I know you like to save people, but do not you see how the whole skyscraper burning in flames. It felt and saw Sam. The entire skyscraper was in flames. And all the smoke went against him. He felt the warmth of here. When Sam did something that he knew he was not allowed to do. He jumped over the fence and ran as fast as he could towards the skyscraper. Come back Sam! Did the police. No Fred shouted Sam and ran into the smoke. Good you came here anyway said a mysterious voice that was the dark shadow's voice. I thought Sam to the police stopped you. What are you doing here The dark shadow? I make sure not to die Sam. And here in the smoke can not you see where I am. I warn you Sam to go in there. I heard a few bangs right. You can be murdered. And how can you breathe in the smoke Sam? I have a breathing mask. Have you gone The dark shadow? Yes, he has thought Sam. Aj cried Sam. Where am I? Thought Sam. Sam looked around. All the lights were turned off. It was dark. The curtains had someone pulled the window. The creaking of the door. Come in Sam screamed and immediately got a terrible pain in his head. It was blurred but he could see that the person was about as long as he had a robe on him. Sam blinked a few times and looked a little clearer.
How are you? Did the person who was standing in front of him was a girl who had brown curly hair. The girl lit the lamp. Now that Sam made clearer, he saw that she had brown eyes and a potato nose. She was thin and had a purple tank top and a pair of tight jeans. She had a pair of brown boots.
I'm Vanessa. I found you among the smoke.
Why did you save me Vanessa? For that I said to you another time. And they say you should promise. Have we met before? Yes, we have Sam. But you were not aware of it. Did Vanessa and smiled at Sam with a broad smile. Is this your house Vanessa? Asked Sam with a tired voice. Yes! This is my house whispered Vanessa bright. Vanessa walked towards the door. I got to go Sam! Go up when you can. And if you want something just ask! Sa Vanessa and looked at Sam with a smile. Vanessa walked out of the room and slammed the door with a bang. Sam thought- about how long he been here. He remembered that someone struck him hard in the head. Sam felt the his head. It did hurt as much as a person to operate without anesthesia. And what did Vanessa there. Sam had many thoughts. When Sam was so fresh, so that he could stay at home, he would travel to the forests of Scotland. There he could meet a person like Sam knew that the person was able to help him. Sam looked up at the ceiling. Sam saw a thick smoke which went into the room. Sam took kit and stood up. He got such a pain that he had received a few times before today. He screamed so it was heard how far away anything. He tried to walk toward the door, but tumbled down after a few steps. He heard footsteps outside the door. Vanessa came into. What has happened Sam? Asked Vanessa nervously. Vanessa took up the Sam and laid him in bed. It came a lot of smoke. So I tried to walk out of here. Did Sam and looked at Vanessa with sparkling eyes and a nervous min. Strange that it came smoke here but not in the kitchen. Did Vanessa and scratched his forehead. I think Sam that someone is looking for you. Why would anyone be looking for me Vanessa? You probably destroy many skurkars plans to save this city. Sam look at me! Did Vanessa and stared at Sam with her brown sparkly eyes. Okay! Did Sam and looked at Vanessa. Did you meet any person from the smoke of the skyscraper? Yes! Who? The dark shadow. The dark shadow? Vanessa stammered. Do you know who it is Vanessa? Asked Sam, staring at Vanessa and scratched his ear. Yes! I know who it is! We do not talk more about that person! Screamed vanessa with an angry voice. And Vanessa? Yes what is it Sam? Sa Vanessa Cross. How long have I been here? Two days have you been here. Sa Vanessa with a little calmer tone. What are you working Sam? Asked Vanessa and looked at Sam with a tired look. I work to save the city and with the news. Sam said, laughing. Okay Sam! Said Vanessa and smiled at Sam. Vanessa went to the window and pulled the curtains and opened the window. The sun was shining and the birds receipted and the cars drove on the streets. Sam! Yes what is it Vanessa? Do you like to listen to songs? Yes, I do! Why do you Vanessa? Cause I just wondering that. I must go now Vanessa. Where should you go Sam? Asked Vanessa uneasily and looked at Sam with a sad face. I'm going to Scotland's forests and meet a man who will help me. Good luck Sam! Vanessa whispered to Sam and gave him a wet kiss on the cheek. Sam shuddered out of luck. Vanessa gave Sam a small sweet smile. Sam stood up and his legs felt like jelly. Sam walked slowly like an old man who was ninety and walked with a walking frame. When he was at the door, he stared at Vanessa with his black eyes.
Good luck Sam! Sa Vanessa with a fine-pitched voice. Sam nodded towards Vanessa and walked out of the room and closed the door. Sam went with uncertain but large steps to the hall. On the walls hung the pictures on a lot of kostiga things and all the walls were black wallpaper. When Sam would go out of the house, he saw a strange thing on the black door of oak. It was a guldig symbol in the middle of the door that looked like the earth was on fire. He stopped to think about it and opened the door and went out and took a deep breath of air. It was the middle of the night. It was pitch black in the sky, but the streets were bright. For all the lights were lit. The moon shone. Sam ran across the street and looked for a taxi that could drive him to the airport. Sam stood on asphalt. A taxi stopped in front of him.
Where are you going? Asked a dark scary voice.
I'm going to the airport Sam stammered and puffed a bit.
Okay! Get in the car. To which airport are you to? Large airport outside the city!

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9 okt, 2013 19:58

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10 okt, 2013 16:38

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Tack Men det var så att jag gjorde det på kvällen när jag var jätte trött så du vet det Men tack

10 okt, 2013 16:40

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Annars var det superspännande^^


Tack Men det var så att jag gjorde det på kvällen när jag var jätte trött så du vet det Men tack
Okej, men tänk på det

10 okt, 2013 16:43

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Jätte bra, men:
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Annars var det superspännande^^


Tack Men det var så att jag gjorde det på kvällen när jag var jätte trött så du vet det Men tack
Okej, men tänk på det


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10 okt, 2013 16:44

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