Hi life [Eng]

Men man kan väl säga bara sister också?

Men du skriv big sister

Oj, jaha. *ändrar* Tack för att du påpekade det ^^

Super bra! Älskar det redan. c: ♥

Texten var väldigt rörande, och enligt mig är det väldigt sorgligt egentligen.
En flicka som har en pappa som ofta dricker, ofta är ensam och bara har sin syster.

Du har väldigt bra engelska, och jag tycker att det är kul att läsa på andra språk.

Jag och mina kompisar lekte en lek i skolan, och då fick jag bestämma namn. Bestämde att jag hette Ellie, och min "syster" skulle heta Annie.

Min reaktion när jag läste kapitlet:
*Så bra!!!!!!!!!*
Wait whuut? Ellie och Annie? xD

Aw tack alla ni är så snälla ♥ jag vill gärna ha kritik om jag skriver fel och så, men tack. Jag ber återigen om ursäkt för min begränsade engelskabegåvning.

Monday, 28th January
Hi life.

Today a new girl came to our class. First I thought she would be another smoking bitch with too much mascara and faked eyebrows. But when the door opened and she took one two three steps into the room I understood she was special. Her hair was pretty short with pieces of it that almost concealed her dark blue eyes. And her hair was the same colour. Blue. No makeup. No signs of smoking or faked eyebrows. And when I heard her name was Laura I was near crying. My mum was named Laura. I liked Laura from the very first time I saw her, and I hope that this is a gift from you, life, something, someone who will help me out. Because mrs. Toots asked Laura to sit by me. I know she said so because nobody wants to sit with me, but it seemed special. Like it were meant to be. It was you, right? Laura didn't complain, she smiled at me and then listened with concentration to mrs. Toots when she told us for the thousandth time about x, y and their similarity, I think. I just could not listen. Laura's dark blue hair, that has exactly the same tone as her eyes (I wonder if she thought of that when she coloured it) is really beautiful. I mean, really. Did you know her left ear has more than five piercings? I saw it, because I sat on her left side.

When the lesson ended I got up quickly and walked out of the classroom alone, like I do every day. I kind of waited for Beca and Eric to come, those who have bullied me for as many years I can remember. They always come on the first break with new comments about how ugly I am and all that. But nobody came. Not even Beca, who always wants to have fun this short break. And the bell rang without me getting any visits on the bench where I always sit. The next lesson was art. When I got into the room I saw Laura before anything else. If I was looking for her? No... She sat alone by a table near the window, the table where I always sit. At first I thought of leaving her alone, anyone would probably sit there, I mean, she's new. But when I saw that all the other tables were occupied, I decided to sit where I usually sit. I sat down opposite her and then I saw it. Her blue hair was wet and dirty, like she'd being dropped in a mud puddle, and her face had a little cut, like she'd been hit. I think she tried to conceal it, but if you've observed humans in whole your entire life, you notice the details that nobody else notice. Like I have. I don't know how I even dared asking, but I did. I asked her what had happened. And when she met my gaze I saw that she was crying. A small tear was letting itself out from her dark blue eye. I didn't know what to do.

I think Beca and Eric was after her. Does this mean they won't bully me anymore? Did you do this, life? Did you decide that Beca and Eric would destroy Laura's future instead of mine? I think you missunderstood, I don't want anybody to get hurt! I don't want Laura's life to be messed up! She is the only one except Annie I've ever talked normally to, and you just decide to mess up her life of all other lives? Why not Beca? Why not Eric? Why me, why Laura? It's unfair. Life is unfair, you are unfair. Everything is unfair!

Yeah, I talked to Laura that lesson. She didn't tell me what happened, but I kinda knew already. Do you know her drawings are beautiful? She's really talented. And I mean really. She drew a black bird with bloody wings, and I've never seen anything more beautiful. When I sat by her side I just couldn't get my pen on the paper, I was too busy staring at her beautiful drawing. I know I used the word 'beautiful' a lot of times there, but it is the only word I can figure out right now to describe her drawing talent. Did you give her that talent? I bet you did.

When the lunch break came after the art lesson Laura's drawing was finished. It could've been a real artist who had drawn it, I promise. I didn't want to disturb Laura, so I left. But she did too. And she joined me by my table at lunch. She smiled at me, and I, I smiled back. Did you hear that? I smiled back. I haven't smiled on, shit, a really long time. But well, she started talking to me, and all her tears were gone, like they'd never been there.
"Hi", she said.
"Hi", I answered.
"My name is Laura"
She blushed.
"But you know that already, don't you?"
I nodded. She smiled.
"And what's your name?"
I tried to smile, but I couldn't. It was the first time in, like, three years somebody asked for my boring name.
"Ellie."
The word sounded like a whisper, but Laura's smile got even bigger.
"Ellie...", she repeated.
The name in fact sounded a little better when she said it.
"What a beautiful name!"
I stopped eating. Beautiful? My name? Was she kidding or something?
"W-what?"
Laura's eyes met mine. Oh gosh, they were so blue.
"Yes", she said, like she didn't understand the question, like it was something obvious.
"Ellie is a very beautiful name."
That was the very first time in a really long time I had heard that.
"Laura is more beautiful", I murmured.
Laura smiled again, and her blue eyes shone.
"Thanks, but I think Ellie is even more beautiful! I want to be named Ellie!"
She put a chicken wing in her mouth and chewed. I was done eating, and we didn't talk more that lunch break. But after I felt good. I really did.

Det är längre än det förra, men det var mest typ en inledning ~

Jättebra! < r

Nae, stackars Laura.

Superbra!

Gah, skit bra :3 ♥